Too busy. You have to decide which is more important - the photo of the car, or the stats. Right now, they conflict for attention. You are on the right path, just get the style in the right direction. I would also photoshop the car to remove the reflection in the windows, the vehicle, and lighten up the rear, as well. Who took the photo and what medium? Digital, I'll bet. This is a great example why I still love shooting with 6x6 and 4x5 film. With a good set of studio strobes (to eliminate the shadows, glare, and dark areas), a lighter background, and a photographer with the experience shooting vehicles such as yours, you would really see the difference. I'm not putting down your efforts, I'm just giving you the constructive criticism you ask for. Good luck with your project.